A Memoir from a Vet

Cliff Friesen was an evangelist. His style of preaching kept your interest as well as fed your soul. When he preached sinners repented. He wrote a book when he was in his late 80’s and though he passed away before it was published, he saw the cover and back.

I was asked to help get it published and contacted a woman on http://www.writing.com who agreed to do it. What an amazing job she did with the cover and back.

When Mary, Cliff’s wife, asked me to help get the book out to the public I posted it on my Facebook page and what a response. I’m so thankful for the people who remembered Cliff and asked for a copy.

Mary is working to get this book into WWII museums, and VFW Posts. I’m hoping to get copies to the VA hospitals. If anyone has connections or would like a copy please contact me

Tropes and Cliches

Do any of you writers have Netflix? Out of curiosity, I watched a documentary called Attack of the Hollywood Cliches. When writing a story, novel or script, these tropes are both comical and true. The narrator, Rob Lowe tells the viewer about each segment. I found them to be inciteful. You may want to look at them with a notebook handy.

We all know the trope “Don’t look in the Basement!” Yet we know they will. We know something awful is going to happen, but we love it.
Why are romance books/movies still popular? Because we love to feel something we don’t have in our own lives, or relive that feeling we’ve had.
Theses bits of cliches work when writing if skillfully crafted so it’s not smashed in the reader’s face.
“Don’t go into the basement!” Can be worked into a thriller, action, horror, even a romance. I remember going through a phase in my teens reading Gothic Romance. Victoria Holt was the mistress of the Gothic genre. She included mystery, romance and suspense in each book. She used tropes, but I don’t know if the word Trope or Cliche was known.


There were some tropes shown I hadn’t thought of. The disfigured villain. Ralph Fine said some kid saw him and started crying. The PC thought was, has the writing/movie world done a disservice to those with a disfigurement? Have we set those with some physical disfigurement apart as someone to be feared? Does the world fear those different, not recognized as normal? What is normal? Thats a topic for another time.

The next situation showed Black people always helping the white person to succeed. This too is something I hadn’t thought about in the context shown. are these tropes intentially written?
Sometimes ignorance isn’t bliss. Sometimes we writers need a 2×4 upside the head.
I suggest, if you can, watch this documentary and view it as a writer. Theses are all first, an idea, then a script, and lastly a movie.

Come back and write your thoughts in the comments.

Vanity Publishers or Self-Publishers

Self Publishers -Are they getting a Bad Rap?

Back in the 1980’s Vanity publishing came on the scene.  The title denoted a service provided to authors who weren’t good enough to get a contract with a traditional publisher.

In those days, authors were charged large sums to get their manuscripts published.  Authors were looked down on for using these publishers.  Still, some authors chose that venue to get their work into the hands of readers. Some Vanity Press companies acted unscrupulously and took money without giving the author value for that price. It made the authors angry.  Some authors expected the same service that traditional publishers and became angry when the reality didn’t match their expectations; they screamed foul.  I’m not saying these Vanity Press Publishers of the early days didn’t take advantage of uninformed authors.

Fast forward thirty years. More authors want to put their book in a reader’s hand without waiting and sending out hundreds of query letters. They want immediate gratification.  That is the keyword: Vanity or instant gratification.

As Amazon came on to the scene, they saw the benefit of providing a medium for the author who either couldn’t write well enough to get a nod from traditional publishers or didn’t want to wait to be discovered.  There have been authors who self-published first then found a traditional published home.  That doesn’t often happen, so don’t hang your hat on that hope.

Along with the self-publishing craze, the vanity publishers escaped from the woods and spent money on advertising.  You’ve seen them on TV, in writing magazines, internet pop-ups, and your favorite publication. They have the answer to publishing that novel you’ve hidden away in a folder for a price. That price usually is about $5,000. It includes editing, cover, formatting, and getting an ISBN. They promised to put your book in front of thousands of readers.  All that was true, but you can’t make people buy a book.  That is what readers do they review books.

They prey on the gullible and the uninformed. Those who believe people are truthful.  They also have expectations of a traditional publisher. When those expectations aren’t met, they become disappointed.

As Amazon grew in popularity, they saw the self-publishing author as an easy mark. They could afford to set up a medium where those authors didn’t have to wait for traditional publishers and made pennies on every sale.  While it’s not much, you add the number of books authors are publishing, and it adds up. Amazon has provided another way to help or hinder the author and still make money at it. Kindle Unlimited.  The reader pays a monthly fee and can read as many books as they want. KDP only has to pay by the number of pages read. If the author isn’t good and the reader stops reading, the author doesn’t get paid. 

This gauge is a good indication of whether your story, writing, or craft engages the reader to continue the end. 

Let’s get back to Vanity Publishers.  I bristle when I hear the term used today. I associate the word with scammers, shysters, and con artists.  Self-publishing has come a long way from those early days. Yes, there are scammers out there, but many publishers charge for their one-stop-shop services yet provide an honest service for a price. 

Do we still label these services Vanity Publisher? I’ve seen Hybrid, and now Indi publishers used nowadays, and I like that better than VP. The stigma the title conveys seems off-putting to hard-working authors who do their best to get their manuscripts ready for publication.

I’ve read if you self-publish, you’re a Vanity author. You can’t get a traditional publishing contract, so you must resort to paying someone to publish your book.  While some people look down on self-publishing, it hasn’t stopped those of us who overlook that stigma and continue to write and publish.  

BOOK REVIEW

If you haven’t read any of Allen Eskens’ books you need to put him on your to-read list.

The Stolen Hours by Allen Eskens

This book will draw you in and hook you. Lila Nash is an intern to a lawyer in the Hennepin County Attorney’s office. She is put on a case of an attempted rape/murder of a young woman. The account is a personal to Lila as she is a victim of rape.

This story is broke into separate points of view. Lila, Gavin the suspect, and the detectives. Each tells their story moving the case as the reader is pulled along. The reader is told what and who committed the crime, the meticulous measures to hide the evidence and the slow unraveling of those clues.

Lila becomes personally involved in this case which drives her to dig deeper into her past. What can she do to help find this serial rapist or murderer? Allen knows how to manipulate the reader by arranging the chapters so the reader is taken from one person to the next.

Please put this book on your reading list as well as all his other books which are equally as good. Start with The Life We Bury, which introduces us to Joe Peyton and his neighbor Lila Nash.

Book Trailers-To use or Not to use

I’ve watched book trailers. Some I enjoyed others didn’t grab my interest. That’s the purpose. Grabbing the casual reader’s interest so they follow the link and read more about the book. I thought the medium felt out of my league. These authors had money to spend or they were techies who loved to make movies. I was wrong.

Thanks to my FaceBook writing groups, I discovered Fivrr. This business website offers a connection of want/need to know how and budget. People who have a skill, offer that service at somewhat reasonable price. That means people like me, who have no budget and might be on a fixed income, can afford to buy the service they need or want.

We (writers) all want to produce the best product out there, and that can cost an arm and a leg, we need both. After searching the site, I discovered a number of the people offering to make book trailers. They all charged about the same price. I had a couple names referred to me and checked out their samples. They ranged from $5-$50. I thought to myself for the cost of a tank of gas, I could have a book trailer. I could save a month of latte’s for a medium priced trailer.

There are pages of samples to look at. I first looked at all the samples that fit my genre or something similar and their prices. I picked two, a low price from the referral and one that had a good amount of positive reviews. The second offered a quick sample based on my blurb.

When I received the sample, within hours. I felt elated. It was beyond my expectations. We had a few back and forth dialogues and I bought the “gig” as they call them. I’m a creative person. I love movies and I have a eye for visual storytelling, at least I think I do. I put my vision out for this person as a guide letting them fill in what they found to fit.

After a few days I received the product for approval. This video fit my narrative. I recognize the fact this isn’t a MOVIE. This person didn’t go out and film a trailer based on my book. They took the concept and adapted it to the best of their ability. They found footage that simulated the feel. Now if someone has read my book then saw the trailer, they could pick out the things that didn’t exactly fit. I’m sure they would say it fit the general essence of the book.

I haven’t received the first trailer I ordered for a lesser price. I thought the video they produced for another author was quite good. I was impressed. I gave them the same script I gave to the other “gigster” (my made up name, if they can do it, so can I). I wonder what I’ll get from them?

Below is the link to the book trailer. I hope you watch it and are intrigued to buy the book. It’s available on both Amazon and Barnes and Noble. Beneath the Ice by C. M. Weaver

https://fb.watch/7vCsxbZjAt/

Book 3 is Published

I know it’s been awhile since I posted. A lot has happened and I’m now the proud owner of another published book. It’s been on Amazon as well as Barnes and Noble for a a couple months. I went on a work trip with my husband and now I’m home and focusing on ghostwriting a memoir as well as promoting this book.

Beneath the Ice by C.M. Weaver is a story set in St. Paul, Minnesota during the cold winter month of January. Detective Andrea Watson braves the subzero weather to watch ice blocks being cut from Blue Lake. This lake gives the crystal clear ice used to build the ice palace for the annual Winter Carnival.

While watching the process, Andrea sees something horrific in a couple of the ice blocks. Frozen body parts. She immediately heads to the action followed by a man standing next to her. He is Fletcher Peterson a FBI agent new to Minnesota.

Together they follow clues to find a serial killer. When a local TV reporter who harasses Andrea about her father’s involvement in the case goes missing, the two have to find the killer before he kills the reporter.

I lived in Minnesota for over thirty years. While I love the Winter Carnival, I got tired of shoveling snow. We moved to Oregon. Writing stories set in places I’ve been or have some familiarity makes moving characters in the setting easier.

I hope if this synopsis intrigues you to visit my website and either buy a signed copy from me or purchase a book from your preferred bookstore.

http://www.christinaweaverauthor.com

http://www.christinamweaver.com

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Editing

I would like to say I’m a great reader and writer. I’d like to say that, but it’s not true. I’m a work in progress. Before submitting my manuscript for publishing, I had a friend read it. She did a good job, except she did tell me she got so caught up in the story she didn’t find many corrections.

That being said, I’ve read the manuscript so many times, my eyes pass over things I need to fix. I received a paperback copy of my book and I began to read it. To my horror I found basic mistakes. How could I have missed these? How could my friend miss them? I spent a week reading and I hope I’ve caught the majority of the mistakes.

I hope when they are fixed, my readers will be caught up in the story and overlook anything I may have missed this go through.

I will post when the new revisions have been uploaded and available to buy.

Submitted

Sunday, January 31, 2021, I sent an email with my manuscript attached. I received a confirmation and a call that it’s in the reviewing process.

The process of writing a book is long. I will admit this one didn’t take as long as Silent River, which took thirty-five years to get published. This book took me about six-eight months to complete. I did some plotting early in 2020 right after COVID hit and I was laid off my job.

Writing websites serve as helps to those who use them. In 2007 I joined Writing.com and I can’t begin to praise the writers there. I posted story after story. They critiqued my work and showed me what I needed to do to make the stories better. They also helped me to become a good reviewer/critic. This site gives me the opportunity to give back to those who helped me.

However, posting stories there may or may not get you the immediate response you need when you are writing a novel. I receive review request now and then. I didn’t ask for reviews from those who are on the site as I wanted a variety of responses. I submitted my chapters to The Write Practice.

This site isn’t free like writing.com is. You can’t earn your membership on TWP like you can with WdC. This site is set up to teach you how to get published. Joe Bunting has seminars, that run the gambit from learning to plot your novel to write 2 publish.

The Write Practice writers gave me great feed back with in a few hours/day. After I posted my chapter (or portion there of) I had to review three other writers before I could see my reviews. It helps everyone get noticed. In return I had a number of followers who reviewed my work as I posted. This kept me on track and gave helped me to be accountable for the weekly posting.

Once I finished the manuscript. I needed readers to tell me if I left holes in the plot, or changed names (which I did, thank you Molly G. for catching that) Then as I blogged last time, I edited it. I know there is no book that is perfect, but I will say this is the best I’ve produced so far and I’m still learning.

I have another plot I’m starting and a rewrite for a friend that’s in progress.

Thank you all for following my blog and supporting my writing.

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Editing is work!

This is a wakeup call to writers. Some of you have passed this stage and some of you are, like me, have to be hit over the head with it. Editing.

On my first book, I had an “editor” who went through my manuscript line by line. I appreciated that, but one person can’t do it all. I’m discovering that. My next book, had a quick Grammarly edit and I had the program read it back to me so I could hear it. It sounded good and I let it go to a publisher.

This time I put it though the Grammarly program and caught most of the problems they detected. On Facebook there are advertisers. I saw one that had a program indicating it did an in-depth look at the manuscript. It’s called Authors A.I. I finally figured how to submit my MS. What a wake up call. They gave a list of words that had been repeated as well as other areas I needed to look at. I began to work on that.

A friend had mentioned a program she used and I’d listened to her talk about it but didn’t pursue it. This time when she talked, I listened.

Autocrit is an amazing program if you want to work your manuscript into something that readers aren’t going to pick apart. (There are those who will do it no matter what you do.)

The first section I chose to address was PACING. I found it had to do partly with my writing and partly the way the program read my MS. I fixed the problems until I had a thumbs up.

My next point of attack dealt with STRONG WRITING/show vs. tell. I’m still there working on words they highlighted, Know, see, there, feel/feeling and it’s. These words are hard to replace and not use other words they list as telling. I’m still working on this section, but I’m almost done.

I know when I get through this process, I’ll have a better book than I had at the beginning.

Update: I finished the laborious task of editing. This is tedious but well worth the effort. I’m sure I didn’t catch everything. Knowing I did my best gives me satisfaction when I pressed the SEND on the email.

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